Monday, June 14, 2010

Poetry ~ Goddess Romance and Revenge

Geez, the middle of June already. Can you believe it? The storms have been relentless on the tame prairie and a bolt of lightning out of the blue zapped my phone line several days ago. That required days of finding out the specific problems, then having a new modem installed.

Since no one was scheduled to blog, I thought I’d jump in and offer up a poem I wrote yesterday under the influence of the New Moon and because of Flash Fiction Sunday at the Liquid Silver blog ~ that is, before I enter deep into the edit cave.

Poetic vibes must be in the stormy air or in the stars, since there was exceptional poetry instead of the usual flash-ing at Liquid Silver.

This X-poem is about my goddess heroine in a novella [not pubbed] that I wrote about ten years ago, titled ~ Goddess from the Dark Side of the Moon ~

Silvery translucence
she slid down his cheek
as one drop of rain.
To torment him further
she rained herself
upon his dark golden hair.
To torture his need for her
she sluiced her goddess essence
over his Apollo-handsome physique
caressing every bold muscle,
every masculine plane of him
until he raised his face
to Earth’s gray pearl sky
and silently shouted her name.
She bathed him in her
beauteous Venus nature
until he clenched his eyelids
and begged for her.
She showered him with her desires
until he groaned like Mt. Vesuvius.
Until he screamed through the cosmos
pleading for her favor.
His human body strained,
a statue of blazing marble for her.
Only her.
Taking her woman’s revenge
she whirled as sheets of rain around
his naked body, shuddering him.
She saturated him with her
erotic dreams of him.
Only him.
Slowly, she slid her watery being,
her silvered transparency
down his taut agonized groin
and spun up his pillar-standing phallus.
Wickedly, she drove him to the brink
of ecstasy, then flowed from him,
denying him, leaving him to feel
the lava blazes of Hades,
as if the Lord of the Underworld
consumed his flesh to punish his
lover’s misdeeds, his betrayal of her.
Satisfied, still she cried her own tears
as splashing drops of rain
upon the thirsty Earth.
Transforming to ethereal goddess
above him, she whispered his name.
He opened his dark-as-midnight eyes
and she vanished from him
like wisps of fairy mist
before the gold-soft brilliance
of the morning’s risen sun.

May your romance reading dreams come true...


Savanna Kougar ~ Run on the Wild Side of Romance ~


LK Hunsaker said...

Very pretty/sensual/endearing, Savanna!

Savanna Kougar said...

LK, thanks!so much. I'm glad you read it.

Bekki Lynn said...

Wow! That was pure senusal power.

Very beautiful, Savanna.

Savanna Kougar said...

Oh, Bekki, thank you!

Lindsay Townsend said...

Beautiful, evocative poem, Savanna.

(Maybe we should think about a poetry week here at HEA?)

Serena Shay said...

Nice! I like it this way too, Savanna. Very sexy. ;)

Savanna Kougar said...

Lindsay, poetry week could be HEA fun and great for summer.

Savanna Kougar said...

Serena, thanks! I've read your awesome poetry.